lol didn't realise it was a oneshot :D anyway look forward to reading more of your stuff,

Ella Bells :)

Wow you're a really good writer and this has such a cool storyline. If I had any improvements then it would be to include more character descriptions. I'm going to read the next chapter and then check out some of your other fanfics.

Ella Bells :)

i almost cried ! it was good, i liked it but it feels like its been done before

OMG i almost cried... loved it, its so awesome! yo should write more...