Um...

This is good, it's sad not manny people commented on it but it is really good. I'm happy you finished it becuase it seems not many Wolf's Rain stories were finsihed. It is awesome

AWW I LOVE IT!

I love the ending! so cute and sad!

:')

I'm sorry but I have to laugh at the name thought: shit-a LOL I love saying that. **new favorite name**

Wow, that was a good retelling of the story!

Hm, depressing. I like how you ended it with all of them reuniting in paradise. I didn't like the human part though. I never did like it at the end of the anime, the idea that they were all "reborn" in the same world as humans and didn't know each other. I hated how they all died at the end. Especially how Kiba died, just falling into the lake and sinking to the bottom. But that might be because I have a phobia of dieing from lack of breath...

You really didn't think your readers would know the song? Seriously, it's like someone in a lord of the rings fic putting in the song "into the west" and if they're really stupid, have their character sing it. And then they say at the end, "Oh, and I decided to put in a song called 'into the west'." We all saw the series, we all know the song. It's completely unnecessary to include it in the fic, because we all also know that you only added it for bulk to make the chapter look bigger.

Anyway, It was ok other than that. I wasn't completely surprised or mesmerized by it because it was pretty much reading the episode with shita on the sidelines. But it was pretty good, all things considered.

Sorry i havent had a chance to review your story before now. This chapter was very good but i'n curious about how and if your going to allow us to see Hige and Toboe get split up or if your just going to explain by using Toboe when he meets up with Tsume.

You have done a wonderful job incorpuratibng Shita into the original storyline and have also been terrific at updating your story. I look forward to the next chapter please post it soon.

Please update I LOVE this story that you have written it is really good,also I think it is so cute how Kiba acts like a father to Shita ,Really great story hope you update,well bye bye for now:)

Wow!

I really like this! Update soon!

MORE! SHITA IS SO CUTE