That's juat plain evil!! You can't end it here!...Well, you obviously did, but man!I'd so much like to see what would John do next, would he face Sam? Would Sam tell him that it was him pushing Dean into this and not the other way around?? This was brilliantly written!

P.S. I don't really like John Winchester so I was happy for Dean standing up to him!!

Wow. This was so good! I know it has been awhile since this story, I just found it, but I hope you do a sequel. Please! It's just calling out for it! I wanna what John means by, "We'll see about that". I wanna know if Dean is going to tell Sam what happened. I wanna see more of the close bond that you've written between them. I wanna see some napping! Please!

Wow, good fic. Is there a sequal?

This has to be the best and most realistic John finds out story ever written. No matter how much us fans would like the three of them to be at peace with each other, it's not so likely that John would be approving of any form of wincest. And, of course, your writing ability tops the plot off, cementing its status as great.

Ah, at the rate I'm reading, I'm going to end up favoriting all of your stories by the end of the night. I love this story, great pairing. I hear a lot of complaints about it, but I don't think so. I don't mind, actually.

Anyway love it again! :D Wonderful work.

Dude you cannot just leave it like that! That is so evil! Great fic but then I kinda love all your work. Please do a follow up or continue this. Gotta see what John does, Sams reaction you know the whole nine yards. Go for it. Please x

A follow up to this would be AWESOME.

I loved this so very much! I would also love to see Sam come back to the room. *hint hint*

keep on writing.

This was wonderful! You know in my head - if this was to happen to the boys- one would have to blame John and their lifestyles for it. So glad to see Dean stand up to his father here! :0)

Great job. It felt really authentic. You really captured the characters, making it believable. The story idea was also compelling and I'm hoping that you will continue this idea in another story.

"And he'd chosen Sam."
Lovely, lovely, lovely... This fic shows how I feel John Winchester and how I feel the relationship between Dean and him.
I really love the way you write.
Bye.
EmptySpaces11

Oh my... that was a difficult thing, but really, really well written, I like the perspectives and angles.. I'd just like to know whatever John plansto do about Sam. Oh and another thing... there are so many fics now that pair them up like it's with every other coupleout there, but it's not. you don't do that and that kind of acknowledgement is really important to me, otherwise thestories are not authentic. It's their unique set of circumstances that gives the opening of such feelings and nothing else.. you convey that.. brilliantly!
Cat

"Your heart?" John spat bitterly. "I know what organ leads you around, boy, and it's not your heart. You've spent half your life jumping on anything that breathes, but not this time. Not my son, d'you hear me? Not my son!"

"I'm your son too," Dean forced out.

Poor Dean...

It's because of John's favoritism that I hate him sometimes...

What a emotional and tense scene between Dean and John, you did an excellent job.
I kept expecting Sam to walk in, but I'm glad that he didn't. Dean faced his father by himself and chose Sam, following the only order that mattered...his heart.
Always nice to see a new story from you.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Very powerful and brilliantly written! Love, Robin