... I'm pretty sure this whole thing made me swoon.

Oh, Ash. Why are you so damn irresistable? Amazing job.

One of the BEST stories Ive ever

I think you did a brilliant job of telling the story through texts. Great work!

No way I haven't reviewed this yet?

Great work. Really got the characters down. I loved this moment:

"As if he actually understood that what he'd done was wrong. And in his doing this, Misty knew that Ash truly, genuinely, and completely meant everything he'd put in the notes he'd sent her…

And that frightened her more than words could express.

Shaken, she read the newest note:" -Perfect character development, wonderful written, beautifully timed.

Also nice bookending with the bits about Misty's types of days.

Great work!

Awesome story! looovveed it!

That is E-X-A-C-T-L-Y how i pictured Misty would accept a proposal! :D :D :D

"Will you marry me?"

"...Fine then." *shuts door on Ash* BRILLIANT! xD

This was one of the very, very few stories i've read that are near-perfection! I ADORED this story, it left me with the biggest, goofiest smile on my face! _ Loved it loved it loved it! I couldnt have asked for a better way to end my night!

"Her eye twitched. How very much like Ash, ruining a moment of beauty by

merely existing."

Best line in the whole story, i loved it XD.

The proposal was a bit sudden, but I loved the way Misty handled it. :D Great job.

Really great story!

*Smiles* That was so, so good! Lovely ending, just perfect!

Cute story! I'm glad she said yes :P You have a very nice selection of stories to choose from!

Well, this is probably the most realistic, believable in-character Pokeshipping story I've ever read. Let's break it down.

First, it was realistic. I'm talking about the situation. About every single jaded young adult has gone through the drama of a tedious text conversation like that. You wrote the emotional roller-coaster perfectly. Well done.

It was also believable and very in-character. Ash and Misty are a lot older in your story, so things like this could happen. But, its just like Ash to confess to her, have a one night stand and wait a whole year to confront her about it. And Misty's character was spot on. So much anamosity and bitterness held in for so long really justifies her actions and feelings.

There were hilarious parts and sad parts; but it is overall brilliant. Next time stupid allows be to login, I'm adding this to my favorites. Every Pokeshipper should read this.

-dinobot

Adorable! Sorry for the slew of reviews for your pokemon stories, but I just can't seem to find many well-written pokemon fics out there, and I am super excited about finding yours.

The quality of your writing is just so exact, with a good amount of detail but not too many flowery descriptions. The way you started and ended with the same lines is a device many use, but you've used it to its fullest effect here, and it's just great to see.

The use of texts was cute. I kept thinking - "Ohoho, when they stop texting it's gonna have to be GOOD" - and man, it was.

- Sakura

Aww, totally adorable, I really enjoyed the whole thing, and I also loved how you wrote Misty's character.

Oh...Wow...I'm shocked-still.

The passion in this story was simply divine. It was deep, touching, heartfelt, and a perfect happy ending. I luff it. I'm going to re-read it now and treasure this story. My muse for Pokeshipping just may be returning...Thanks to this wonderful fanfic. I thank you for writing this up. It's truly something to marvel at. No doubt that its going into my faves and staying there.

The Sky's Bouquet

OMFG!Once more, to my utter amazement, you manage to out do yourself. Every time I click on a new Pokemon story of yours to read and I finish it, I think to myself 'this is the best yet and she can't possibly get any better' and every time you make a liar out of me. This was so emotionally beautiful, I even teared up a little bit myself. Gorgeous work! Even despite the angst and drama, I still managed to laugh when she slammed the door in his face.

This is perfect!