for all its brevity (that is a word right?), this story is still an old favite of mine

realy good update

Hotaru better fall in love with Chibi-Usa like in cannon

This what a pretty nice story, too bad you don't seem to be working on it anymore...hopefully after your bleach crossover you'll consider some of these older fics.

Again, a truly wonderful story lost in time.. I'd love to see this continued.

either you quit or are dead and none of those options are good so if your still alive keep writing and if you dont want to write no more get someone else to continue PLEASE it would be such a shame to not continue with your stories cause im a fan of all your fics and dont want this to end.

Sigh. Oh well, he was probably evil incarnate with

a smile like that.

*chuckle*

That is the standard in an SM universe.

Interesting chapter. Update!

"Idiot!" she snapped, bopping him on the head with her staff.

Yep she's spent time with Cologne!

Ranma turned a little green and Hotaru chuckled."Sorry, honey, but I

wouldn't be caught dead in that getup."

LOL. Wait until she finds out its required. At least Happosai

will be happy.

Pluto as his mom. That's a twist.

Grandmother Cologne? Does this mean Saturn is an Amazon?

*grin*

I like the techniques you have for the two. Amazon for

one and Musk for the other. A nice addition.

"She's not too bad on crowd control," Ranma commented lightly.

Everybody has to have at least one good quality and it looked like

they had just found Akane's.

LOL!

*chuckle* Kuno!

"randomly fighting off a horde of zombies trained

in ninjitsu." "though her nose did wrinkle cutely

at the smell of burning human flesh"

*Chuckle*

You have a way with words!

"Hi, I'm Hotaru, wanna be friends?" she asked,

extending her hand in greeting.

So she takes the place of Akane. Neat.

Hey now thats a cool idea. WANT, MORE, MORE, MORE!

Please continue that story! Pretty please!

Awesome story so far! I look forward to reading more.

I would say that Ryoga would embody Chaos quite nicely. I mean, what other than Chaos could allow someone to get lost as easily.

Very nice, Kasumi as Life ? Most certianly. Now Death I first

thought Ryouga with the whole Lum/oni look of his, but then Gosunkugi popped in. He looks like death warmed over so it kinda fits. For Order Miss Hinako the ultimate authorion. For Chaos no clue as the prime candidate is already a rep.

I'm sorry, I just had to make a note that LEE is NOT a Japanese last name. Find a full japanese person with the last name Lee and I'll pay you lots of money. Good fic though.