I liked the end because usually when characters get sidetracked form doing whatever, they never say what happened at the other people's place or whatever. It's almost 4am, I don't care if that made no sense at all. Bare with me.

O_O...this was so darn smexy!O_O...please write more!

cute story :)

Aa, that was so incredibly out of character. I love the concept, but it you didn't call the characters by their names, I would have no idea that this was a Death Note fan fiction.

Hmm, not bad. But L did seem quite OOC.

wow. that was interesting. _