i love angst, because it shows real, strong emotions of a character and makes them seem more...real. this was really good, and you did a good job on describing how tess was rejected from different people each time. the last line was a great ending - had a lasting finality to it.

Wow, that's all i can say. WOW. It was so emotional it was perfect.

Lx

Wow.

I absolutely loved this. It was intense. Heart-breaking and wonderful at the same time.

Your style...amazing.

Bravo.

Maeke

So tragic! D yet so wonderful When I read this, I was thinking 'OMG I didn't expect this to happen!'

Lol I thought when you said Tess Tyler would go out with a bang, I took bang as something glamorous and successful D Got me there

aaw poor tess i know how she feelsthough thank god i stopped selfharming and stuff in time i know whatshe goes through only i dont force myslef to be perfect for my mum i try to do it to stop the bullying i go through u should do another chapter where mitchie and catylin go to her funaral and realise what she went through

This was absolutely brilliant.

God, I can't think of any words that can express how truly beautiful this story was.

It was as if you could feel every single emotion that Tess was feeling, betrayal being the one that stood out the most.

Usually my reviews are longer than this, but I honestly cannot even describe how much I adore this story.

You wrote this beautifully and with so much emotion.

This is definitely one of my favorite stories on fanfiction, hands down.

It was amazing.

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It was really sad, but I loved it. I think you did a good job conveying Tess' feelings. Good luck!

livelaughlove,

kitty .

so god. im not a very good reviewer, but it was reeally good.

You know what I kinda like this story even though it is depressing, but I would like to know how they react after she dies.

this was really good and...different. ppl ususally find a way 2 save the person when they write it so theres no character death, and a lot of times they make it seem unrealistic ya kno? this was awesome tho and i luved it. gr8 writin! :)

D AH! THAT WAS SO SAD! TT_TT

And yes, it was very different. I'm pretty used to fluffy fics, so this...was something different )

I'm not saying I don't like it (I do) but it's sad, which makes me not want to like it...but I do...does that make ANY sense?

LOL

Libby

this is awesome. My favorite line was. "Red was beautiful" idk why but i just like it, it has meaning. the story overall was complete genius, the part where it talks about the spidery scars, awesome.

So I can't decide which is more depressing, this fic or the tons of AP homework I have to do before tomorrow. :(

One, you might wanna change the rating to T. ;)

Two, just *beautiful*, the writing, the imagery. Everything. You can feel Tess' pain; writing raw emotion and making it feel realistic is not something easy and you did it excellently.

Three, I hated freshmen health. Urgh. Remember Seven Days? Yeah. SD is to this fic as ...we are to awesomeness? Yeah, you get point. I know how you feel, dearie.

But now I really should do my AP stuff.

(Oh *by the way*...you're too lazy to review and comment on LJ, and yet I do *and* you've written something! :P Yes, I'm trying to make you feel guilty. Is it working? At all? *froggieeyes*)

Wow. That was really deep. Even though it was a oneshot (no pun intended) it was really good. It encompases all the reasons Tess was who she was and gave a very legitamte reason to the too common teenage suicide. And we wonder why stars are screwy- the have to deal with crap like this all the time. The whole thing was done really well, really tastefully, when it is so easy to cross over that line into unreal, corny and almost insulting. Thank you for writing this. Too many fics today all have happy endings. That's not life. This story is.

wow, that was like..wow! look what you did to me! im at a loss for friken words! lol! great story!

*future-rokkstar*

angie