This is my Fav. Outsiders fic! Please keep writing it!

What a powerful story...I'm just catching up, so I guess I'm speaking generally...

As you said from pre-chapter one, this isn't about "teh hawt mansecks", but about something much more important. It's interesting, because if this story were presented in a very simplified fashion--Pony is being both sexually and verbally abused--there's automatic opposition to the situation. But because we're seeing this story from Pony's perspective--his confusion, his desire, etc--it doesn't come off in such a definite way. I think the brothers are obviously OOC, and the story can almost be classified as AU since the book's events didn't really happen, but it makes for a good read anyway. It's interesting to watch Pony's reaction and change in mental state and emotion with every new development in the story. It's almost hard to read...both Soda and Darry are assholes, and no one else is really in the know...I feel Pony's frustration.

And just one last comment: great writing. I alway forget to mention this because it's easy to overlook grammar and writing style when it's not distracting...fantastic job!

Thank you for an original, well-constructed tale...looking forward to chapter 10! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :)

hope you write again. i like your story. its well written, sucks you in. im glad you didn't give up on it.

Hey, I really like this and can't wait for more. Please update soon. ;D

OMG you finally updated! I love this story! Please don't take so long to update the next chapter! =)

Holy shit, you updated! All hail the sexy, brilliant, untouchable Mark Jennings! I'm sorry, but I just the dude, even if he's a little screwy in the head. I hope he kicks Soda's ass (never thought I'd write those words!). And God help us with Mr. Winston! I'm laughing my ass off if he made a move on Tim Shepard. Oh God..the world would most deffinately end if the toughest hood in Tulsa turned out to be queer!
Best description ever is "his eyes shining dully" (it was something like that). It's just brilliant! Don't take too long to update again!

I knew there was a reason why I loved you. This, holy shit, man. There were so many emotions, and all the things that just made me wanna smack Soda in the face for being so, just, ugh. And all the things that made me go shitshitshit throughout the entire thing. I was so sucked in by the end that I was a little sad when it was over.

Now Dally talking to Ponyboy? Great.

update soon, love.
Jenny

I'm so glad you updated!
I've been needing some well written stories lately.
I love the detail.
ahh cliff hanger!
Update soon please!

yay (: u updated!! i was wondering when u would actually post another chapter x)

man.. this is like the only fanifc where i actually HATE soda.. kudos to you becuase only you can probably make me hate him..

cliff hanger with dalas.. >.<

update real soon!

Yayy, you updated! It was really good too. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

You need to come back.

Best story ever lol

Most amazing thing I have read in a while. I loved this and would love to see more. Wonderful job.

Hey i really love ur story! Not only because Sodaxpony is my fav outsider couple ever, but also cause ur a really good writer!!^^ ...Would u like to join my SodaxPony community? =)

OMG UPDATE SOON! XD