 keybladeboy 2008-10-06 . chapter 2Completely believable in every part, and I love it! Ted's winning the lottery was great, Dr. Cox finally gives J.D that long-awaited hug, and we have a new narrative. If this weren't on , I'd think that this was the actual ending for Season 8.
BTW, it would be cool if you'd give the red-head a slightly different personality from J.D's, while still keeping the key aspects, such as the "extra mile" stuff, daydreams, and sabotaging every relationship they run into. But you could always change some parts up, like keeping her in the present as opposed to J.D's watching the future.
I'll keep an eye out for a sequel. |