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Reviews for: 50 Coins, 1 Plumber, 1 Princess
Walkazo
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Talk about run-up sentences! Meh, whatever.

- I like how Peach swings Mario around.
- The pschebomb thing is SO true!
- The Chucklehuck Cola and Scrabble ones are funny.
- The "Bias" Pink vs. Blue is a bit of a stretch.
- The hat/crown one is nice.
- "Bane", "Share", and "Defeat" = ZOMG!
- "Quirks" is good: what is ?? anyway? ^_^
- The line "I wish I coukd quit you" and all of "Sololoquy" made no sense.
- "Jester": Ever heard of the ACTUAL game "Mario the Juggler"? :D
- Now I want to know what Bowser's pick-up line in "Serenade" is! :P
- I've never heard the "N" "O" counter to the "U" "I" line before XD
- "Nuance" is bad.
- "Near" is creepy.
- In "Natural" he kissed her SHOULDER?
- In "Horizon", the line should be: "he stretched his aching ARMS"
- "Virtuous" is backwards: Mario knew Peach was Cackletta's target (seeing as she attacked her already) before he met her.

In conclusion, most were good, but the MxP got a bit boring after a while.
James Birdsong
2008-10-01 . chapter 1
Awesome.
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