|Reviews for Though the Heavens May Fall|
| WindKitsuneofDarkness 5/7/13 . chapter 1
A beautifully written series with strong characterisation, placed in a setting which comes across as being simultaneously engaging and very believable: you're an incredible writer. Judging by the time lapse since your last update and the present though, I'm assuming that you won't be continuing this story any longer? It's a shame - I'd really enjoy it if you intended on continuing.
| pansy25 4/26/13 . chapter 13
I feel sorry for Cagalli and Stellar. It must be hurting them so much to be apart. And yay, Natarle is her! i always liked her despite her by the book attitude.
| Sleepyreader319 4/8/13 . chapter 13
Uh oh... trouble is approaching! Update soon!
| ang.xinli 2/22/13 . chapter 13
I hope you still have the heart to finish this. :) I find it a really nice story, and you just so happened to stop at a very engaging point. . I really want to know what happens...
| thelifethatneverends 2/19/13 . chapter 13
I was just wondering if you would ever consider finishing this story? I know it has been years and I don't mean to bother you, but I am eagerly curious about the ending.
| Miri28 2/9/13 . chapter 13
I regret not reading this story sooner, seeing as several years have passed since the last update and the story hasn't been completed. Still, I'm very glad I read it regardless.
I'm not one for reading AU stories, but this is refreshing and well thought out. The characters seem very true to their SEED personalities and what I like most is that the women in the story are so strong and equal to the men around them. It kind of made me feel empowered, even as I fangirled over the Dearka x Miriallia bits.
I love how all the different characters were included in this new world in a way that makes sense. You had me hooked for several hours on this story, and LJBD. A wonderful concept and unique idea- well done.
| lezala 1/27/13 . chapter 13
you've should continued this..
and please, much much please dont dropped this..
| ShaNelSha 12/27/12 . chapter 13
this fic is one of my fave,, u've should continue thiz! i'm beggin' you :)
| unspoken.command 12/17/12 . chapter 13
The intricate relationships and cultural composition is amazing. I like how you juxtaposed all the different types of relationships and characters showing different forms and ways of expressing love that is natural to everyone involved. It's a wonderful creation you're making. :)
| Guest 12/10/12 . chapter 13
this is so good, i cant deal with this. i shiver in excitement when i read this, PLEASE FINISH THIS I BEG OF YOU. kthnxbai. im genuinely in love with the ff. i cant stop reading it. i hope i can see the rest of chapters up sometime in the near future. your english is near impeccable, im super jealous. thank you so much for bringing such a wonderful ff and story into life
| shafinaattha 10/16/12 . chapter 1
pliz update... !
thiz is best story i ever read... (actually:second place he..., first place is : LJBD.. yay )
nice plot.. nice characters (ezpecially:asucaga moment :D)
i'm beggin' u..
| msthanatos 10/8/12 . chapter 13
I can't believe I just finished this fic and Let Justice Be Done in one sitting. You are one hell of an amazing writer and I just love how you captured the GS characters perfectly! I really like the mix of humor and drama here and though I noticed that it's been a while since you last updated I do hope you still plan to finish this fic. It's just too awesome for words! Hope you update soon! :)
| Pia Bartolini 9/25/12 . chapter 13
This story is turning out as excellent as its predecessor. I confess I'm saddened to see it put on extended hiatus and do hope you finish your work with it if inspiration strikes and the time is available. Intricate plot, sympathetic characters, and lots of excellent writing tying it all together. Bravo!
| shiloah18 7/3/12 . chapter 8
Cagalli being oblivious to her own beauty reminds me of One Direction's song. lol
"...she was sure that at her skin matched the red of her dress." omit "at"?
"She looked so soft and innocent when she was embarrassed, Athrun thought almost gleefully." Hmm... for some reason, this makes me think of Athrun as a sadist. In a good way (if there is one). XD
Yzak, all of things to glare at... the bread? -_
"It looked as if he had stuck gold." stuck? struck?
Cagalli's good with maneuvering the topic of conversation from her to Yzak. Well done! If not, Kira would've had Athrun's head! XD
"At the same it," it? time?
"While lower ranked personnel stayed in barracks..." *inserts "the" between "in" and "barracks"*
"She was not be bombarded..." *omits "be"*
"Them younger woman's brown hair was all over her face," them? the?
"...where do you see yourself in ten years?" Sounds like a job interview to me. lol XD
Muruta looked real cute as a kid. As seen in the special edition of Gundam SEED. Makes me wonder how he would look like if he didn't had that crazed look in the series.
Djibril being so prim and proper is so fitting! XD
I guess Dearka feels what Cagalli felt when she had to fight a ghost. :( Dearka's quite the charmer though! :D
"The noblewoman's study was once her husband's and she had take over it after she passed." take? taken? she? he?
"They the same color hair..." they have the same hair color?
nyWeiZ, five more chaps to go! :3
| Ida Deidre 6/28/12 . chapter 11
I cried on this chapter. This story and it's prequel are amazing, now reading your profile page, I cried again, why did you put this on an extended hiatus. Never mind, great job!