That was... unsettling.

Where's Poindexter when you need him?

Hmm...wow. First, no you're not demented. ^w^ Really, you're just a very good author. Second, these scenarios are amazing, both in the differences and in the similarities. I can see where the two ways of thinking for Danny seem to shift, and yet both ways are true to Danny. It's a nice touch, I think, that you had Dash leave. The meek Danny's problem with suicide was well thought out as well, as was the lost Danny's seperation from society. Hmm...I like it... ^w^

freaking fantastic.

i cringed a few times (okay, so a bunch of times) because... well, hell, it was brutal. but it was so well done.

i loved the separate timelines and how they differed and interconnected at the same time. very well done.

Wow...

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OK, So I'm speechless.

Nylah

Oh...my...god. BRUTAL!! I loved it because I'm demented too, the similarities were almost petic because they were so similiar even though the two choices differed greatly. It was so good...so horrible and dark...but so good.
Wow. Excellent and now with having read that I must go to work. Excellent CD...excellent

tastefully done, dearest. and yay! you added the bit on him flying and falling to his death. next crazy walls danny? :D

My god. That was brutal. Kudos to you for a well done story. A good, but hard read. Keep up the good work.

Yes, that was totally morbid and awesome.
-skitzo

You know, I usually don't like unrelenting tragedy, but I have to say there's something about this one, as dark as it is, that really moved me. I think it's the dual format, with the two separate paths (what was that movie, with the two different outcomes based on whether or not the girl caught or missed her train? but either way it ended the same??) Either choice, it ended the same for him, but in the ultimate injustice, not for his attackers.

I'm glad Dash left. I've never seen Dash as much more than a punk-type bully, not truly brutal. Not that he was exactly heroic here, but at least he wasn't fully a part of it.

Nice job.

craapp... That was good.

I loved the similarities and the jumping back and forth between the two different time lines. That was excellently done. Not at all confusing and incredibly easy to follow. :)

Very angsty. Very delicious.

Thank you THANK YOU for posting it. No guilt needs to be felt for this one. This was fantastic.

-Cori