Sarah,
This is very nice. I have a suggestion though. When you go down a space press 'shift' as you press 'enter' that way you won't have really big gaps between your lines. Sorry, its just the big gaps annoy me a bit.
Oh, you know what?! I bought 'Brisinger' on Saturday! Yay! I haven't had much time to read it though which sucks. But what can you do?
As I said, this is very sweet. Its a nice way of saying 'Haha! Ye of little faith were WRONG! SUCKED IN! HAHA!' But a nicer way. :D
Love Em