I THOUGHT THIS STORY WAS WONDERFULLY WRITTEN GREAT JOB AND REALLY CREATIVE

This story was great, and that is coming from someone who hates songfics with a passion. Even without the lyrics, it could have stood on its own as a story. Not much more to say other than that I absolutely loved it.

I don't typically like songfics, but then again most of the ones I've seen are five-second affairs that really have only the song and maybe a couple lines of story in between each line of song. But this - this is a story. And a very good one, I might add. Great insight into what was both a wonderful and terrible day for the Pride Land Pride.
Keep Writing!

Very good. True to form, though maybe I think I'd like to see a little more of Nuka's clumsiness.

great handling of the pain and fury and ruthlessness of Zira. The addition of the older lioness is really good-shows how exile can affect the old, those who remember the most what happiness was.

Hope to see more-maybe a sequal?

What can I say? "Homeless" is brilliant and so is this! Very well written and very imaginative.

This is a very imaginative peice of writing, corresponding nicley with the song lyrics!

Excellent!

Wardy

*screeeeeech* That is amazing! I love it! It. is. so. beau-ti-ful!

OMG, that was amazing, the lions were so much in character and you portrayed everyone's thoughts and emotions perfectly