 HAKEEM MILLER 3/3/09 . chapter 1 I THOUGHT THIS STORY WAS WONDERFULLY WRITTEN GREAT JOB AND REALLY CREATIVE |
 Nielae 2/6/09 . chapter 1This story was great, and that is coming from someone who hates songfics with a passion. Even without the lyrics, it could have stood on its own as a story. Not much more to say other than that I absolutely loved it. |
 Sparky Lurkdragon 2/23/04 . chapter 1I don't typically like songfics, but then again most of the ones I've seen are five-second affairs that really have only the song and maybe a couple lines of story in between each line of song. But this - this is a story. And a very good one, I might add. Great insight into what was both a wonderful and terrible day for the Pride Land Pride.
Keep Writing! |
 Nefertanya 3/16/02 . chapter 1 Very good. True to form, though maybe I think I'd like to see a little more of Nuka's clumsiness.
great handling of the pain and fury and ruthlessness of Zira. The addition of the older lioness is really good-shows how exile can affect the old, those who remember the most what happiness was.
Hope to see more-maybe a sequal? |
 Wardy 1/30/02 . chapter 1What can I say? "Homeless" is brilliant and so is this! Very well written and very imaginative. |
 Wardy 12/16/01 . chapter 1 This is a very imaginative peice of writing, corresponding nicley with the song lyrics!
Excellent!
Wardy |
 Lori Ann 11/18/01 . chapter 1 *screeeeeech* That is amazing! I love it! It. is. so. beau-ti-ful! |
 CharmedSerenity 11/17/01 . chapter 1OMG, that was amazing, the lions were so much in character and you portrayed everyone's thoughts and emotions perfectly |