GREAT STORY!

Aww this was cute. I didn't expect Cliff being the brother. I thought Gotz was going to be her dad. Lol Oh well.

Great entry! XD

Man, this blows my pathetic little one-shot out of the water, doesn't it? Good luck with the contest(though I doubt you'll need it).

AWW, THIS FIC WAS AWESOME. *sniffles and dabs eyes with tissue* After chap 2, I had thought that she was Cliff's sister...sniffle! I love reuniting family stories...this was really great! You're winning this contest fer sure. Heck, you've got my vote! ;3;

I honestly thought JACK was Charity's brother. I was like "Incest! INCEST!"

This was a beautiful threeshot! And, hey - if you're interested in doing fanfic challenges, I have a fanfic challenge on the Ushi no Tane forums. Email me if you want the link! :)

*sheepishly raises hand*

... I was hoping Gotz was a romantic interest ... o3o

Very cute chapter! The next one's the last one, right?

Holy Goddess! I thought I might cry when he said she could call him Papa! I know, I emotional... but still! Keep writing, please!

I'm a little confused as to who the love interest is - Gotz or Jack?

It was a little more like "love at first sight" with Jack, but with Gotz it's like "I'm comfortable around you, you make me feel at ease; I'm going to fall in love with you, aren't I?"

Either way, I love where this is going - so warm and fluffy! Keep it up!