Great story! Loved that Ray's parents actually support him in this one and that they obviously love Ben. It was also nice to see a serious Huey helping to solve the case.

Grandchildren for Bob! And horses for Ben soon :D What a lovely happy ending. Yay!

Aww, Bob! He shows up at just the right time. I'm so glad Ray can see him and I like that it annoys Fraser just a bit. Very funny. You did a great job of wrapping up the very emotional ending to the trial. It's great to see Ray's mother as a source of strength for Fraser, that's a very believable and lovely relationship.

Ben is so brave! And Ray is going to be so **! ;) I like that Huey trusts Ben to know what he needs to do and is there to help him. I also think the scene with Ben feeling like he can cry on Ray's mum's shoulder is very good. He needs a mother!

Aww... well, smart of Frank to try to use the boys against each other, but they're too tough for that. I love Ray's sense that something's wrong. He's so instinctive and sensitive. Frannie reassuring Dief is lovely and sweet.

Hah, I just love Ray whining about having to run after Dafoe and that being Ben's job. Nice touch of comedy in an otherwise sad and haunting story.

Aww. Ray is so good for poor, damaged Ben. That flashback is so agonizing, all the sweet warmth of a family for Fraser, stolen away from him. I know Ray can make things right for him- as right as is possible after all that!

Wow, poor Ben. I love how his family in the Chicago PD rallies around him. I love the way you write Welsh. He's such a good guy! And Huey... awesome.

Eek! Chilling and nasty crime! And without Fraser there to help solve it just yet. I like the contrast between the boys settling down and being domestic, and the sort of dark stuff that they have to deal with in their jobs as law enforcement officers.