A *sob* I actually cried when I read that rape scene... you wrote Allen's emotion so real I can feel it here... its like I'm the one who were raped! I can feel his heartbreak!
Poor Allen... I knew that Kapersky was the rapist! T^T Only if I was there to warn him *grumbles*
When are you going to update this? WE're waiting ;D

When will you update the next chapter!? xD I'm craving for your wonderful story! x3 Hurry up! Hurry up! Haiyaku, onegai~! xD Update your story please! xD

o: Dark...Awesome though

ohmygosh.. This is so sad. Poor Allen!! He needs his Lavi there. :c
PLEASE. Update soon. <3

update soon

its a nice story, though u mite have overdid the angst w/allen a bit ^^,
still its good
i like it

I KNEW THE TEACHER WAS A PED0! lol poor allen
tat shoulda been lavi, not the teacher *_*

OMG I freakin' love the way you write this fic.

gaahh its soo.. o.o dark..
but i really really like it ~<3
update soon please!

Wow... disturbing.. I'm so mad. How can Lavi not go to see him? I'm shocked... Are you going to update? I think it's interesting.

UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!
I love this story. You portrayed a rape victim's feelings and thoughts about it surprisingly well... I was amazed. And, oh, one thing, though - the victim usually takes a while to remember his/her life before the incident, but one thing - so you got that right. However, if they realize something bad about that one thing, like when Allen thought Lavi was dead, they usually can't form coherent thought. Then when they do, they are overcome with want of death, revenge, and to change things. Thought I'd give you a tip there! Allen would probably really hate the whole Lavi-dealio.

You chose great words, and an interesting plotline. I just hope, Kanda didn't fuck up Lavi's mind so bad that he can't go mother-hen Allen, you know? Moyashi-kun needs that right now.
All in all, update! I love the story!! If you have any questions about the victim's thoughts or something, email me at , but put something not completely stupid as the message title, so I don't spam it. Kay? Bye, hope I helped, and hope you update fo' shizzle!

AWW...MORE!
cannot say anything to describe this story^^

can't wait till the new chapter. i hooked on it... please write more soon

Ho...ly...mother of christ.

I'm the one who got raped ._. -shudders- wow. I'm beyond shocked. Dang, and here I was dismissing the warning to be just the usual routine but noU orz bad mistake, bad mistake...

-slinks away-

damn... i like how u wrote this chap... just lyk a mystery suspense novel, my heart was beating fast and I read through each line not really sure if i want to know what happens next... i liked the part about the secret note and the "RUN" from Sami really enhanced the ominous effect... also, the scene where Allen found the album reminded me of this one manga/drama called LIFE... it was really disturbing... ok gotta continue reading now... GREAT STORY!! =]