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californiaucla
2009-09-01 . chapter 9
soo swet! <3
Mrs.Cullen620
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
new reader! i must say i love this story so far. plz post more soon!
Mrs.Pattinson1991
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
yay i loved this chapter im glad you updated and i definatly agree that the real world sucks lol
chickenn
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
aw yay !! you finally updaated, i was waiting to see what was going to happen next :P
yaay good chapter!! i really liked it :D
aw that's soo cutee edward is so cute lol :P
yay :D
well UPDATE SOON and ill give you a cookie :P
x
chickenn
BeastlySmall
2009-08-18 . chapter 9
Oh my god.. that was complete and utter perfection..
AH! Great amazingtastic chapter!! You write so well:) So freaking excited for whats to come...lol. Can't wait for the next update!!
icefang7
2009-08-18 . chapter 9
aw! this is so sweet! go edward! she needs to travel with him on the weekends! lol thanks and i can't wait for more! good luck with the job hunting!
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2009-08-02 . chapter 1
i love this song
funesti
2009-07-29 . chapter 8
this is such a beautiful story! I'm really enjoying it!!
Please update soon!! I can't wait to here what happens next, and more about the baseball situation!

Thank you agian for such a great read!!
icefang7
2009-07-24 . chapter 8
really good! aw..i love that bella gave him brother! thanks
AliceJasperIsLove
2009-07-23 . chapter 8
Ha. I think this has been my favorite chapter yet. ond the Brother thing was adorable.
BigBear64
2009-07-22 . chapter 8
That was sweet.
Giuls94
2009-07-22 . chapter 8
Hey!
I like this story - all of yours actually - SO MUCH!
I'm sorry I don't review at all the chapters but I honestly don't want to just write the same things all the time. Anyways, I thought this was a good point to say what I think about the story, so here I am. I can't really explain how I 'feel' about this story because I'm Italian and even though I can easily understand English it's not the same for me to form phrases. *lol*
Anyways, I couldn't just sit here not telling anything, that just wasn't fair. So…
I'm really happy you decided to reviewing the whole story and republishing each chapter because it really was a pity when you stopped writing. I understand you, in a way, because even if I'm not quite as talented as you are so maybe it's not the same thing, I had a writing block for like...uhm...5 months? And that's a lot of time!
I told you once, I don't know if you remember - I was GiulyRoberts back then, that I would have tried to come up with some ideas for the story but, I'm sorry, I have none. I really hope that since you're rewriting it you've been able to think of something. Your stories are always wonderful and it's worth waiting ;)
Congrats, Giuls.
xx-Clockwork-Fairy-xx
2009-07-22 . chapter 8
omg omg omg i totally adore this story...

especially the last part, aw that has to be the cutest way to say i love you to anyone hopefully it's all gona be good from now..

i love that you put your own 'rother' in there, i never really had a stuffed animal that was special to me i actually was like that little kid from snoopy cos i loved my blanky and i still have it lol

speaking of brother my eldest bro actually went to a store and made me bear of my own and it's pride of place in my room...

i can't wait to read more much love xoxo
BeastlySmall
2009-07-22 . chapter 8
That. Was. Brilliant. And. Fantastic. I want more:) Aw...I love that you used your own stuffed animal in your story! So cute, Brother:) LOL. I'm so glad Edward and Bella apologized and are back together, but how will Bella react to Edward telling her he loves her? Keep writing; your so good at it and I love this story so far. Can't wait for the next update!
chickenn
2009-07-21 . chapter 7
aw... i hate when edwards being a butthead!

but he's smart so he will work it out soon enough ^_^
which gives me some peace of mind, lol

i just cant get enough of this story really...
its crazy im soo addicted i just need more!
lol
okay enough rambling!
x
chickenn
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