I love, love, LOVE reading about a strong Pansy. You have just made my day. Thanks! As to the actual writing, it rocks.

i like that u put after pansy's pov: ' u never knw until u try'. so true, and though i dont know enough about pansy to judge the appropriateness (not that that's ever stopped me) i cant c her being this in2 him, but then that's partly my prejudice. plus why not?

i like the childhood history bit

what made u do pansy's pov?

Erm. I'm confused. But I understand her feelings. Oh, Lord, I do.

This is my favourite of yours! I love the voice, and the details - the last line is awesome. It's all so poignant!

aww. that was pure brilliance. i loved the raw emotion you infused into the words. i can really feel what pansy's feeling. great job!

-kyra

Well, that just felt a BIT unfinished. Yeah. . .

that't a perspective rare to come across, I love the way you portrayed her, great job on that, and I love that she wasn't in love with Draco, very well done on that :D

the story is really really good Al, I love it! very sad but in a good way, and kind of leaves the opertunity for happiness at the end, which is very nice

great job!

lots of love,

Haley

Beautiful! At some point I forgot who was the writer, it's very different from anything you've done before.. I think your writing is improving ;)And I'm glad it's completely canon.

Keep writing! :):)

Carol

pS: Yay I'm the first to review!