Well written. Your flair for characterization brings many fully realized personalities of the Ronins to life. Please continue as this is one of few stories I've enjoyed reading.

This is the best Ronin Fan Fic I've had the pleasure of reading. Please don't leave it hanging like this :)
Sincerely,
Mo

i like your writing style, especially for allowing Mia's character to spotlight a bit, i am not a fan of people pushing her out of the way...she is actually a pretty cool character and awesome.

i like how the story is going, the pace is good and the storyline is actually endearing to me, like a mystery hunt (you never know what is gonna happen!). I cannot wait to read more, and i think that this is gonna be one of the stories, where as much as you dont want it to end, you wanna know how it is gonna end!

love the sage/mia interactions...keep it up!!

its been so long since you've updated has this story been abandoned, I love it so much I do wish you'd update it

I truly love this fic! But I am so mad at you right now because you left me hanging and I don't know when you're gonna post another chapter! C'mon have mercy! Keep up the good work, there are too many fics on FFN that are just mediocre, not to say that the effort is not appreciated, but let's face it, we all ain't writers! But you are an excellent writer, so keep on keepin' on!

So I'm sort of upset that it takes you so long to update :( Now I read a lot of fanfics and this is my FAVORITE right now. Should I throw out the idea of cookies as an incentive?
As always, a job well done :)

Update it has been a long time and i keep checking back and sadly you still havent updated

Hey, when can we expect to see Chapter 5? *poke, poke, poke*

Please accept my apologizes for taking so long to review your chapter. As usual, I am in awe of the thought and careful planning you have taken in telling this tale. I'm smelling some intrigue, and I can't wait. I do hope to see you post the next chapter too...(I promise to be among the first to comment!!) Keep up the good work!

Well, it seems that this one is turning into a Sage and Mia pairing fic...but I have to admit, it's far better than most I come across. Not too shabby! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

I love this story! It's funny, edgy, and completely engrossing! I give it five stars! I especially loved the paragraph where Cye and Kento get into a fight over the ice cream and Ma patches up the wounds with magic shell! It was cute!

I love this story so far! I love how you've portrayed everyone! Especially Mia and Kento! Most people make Mia out to be a whiny, irritating b* or they pair her up with Ryo or Sage! I like they way they treat her like a sister! Most people make Kento out to be a fat, disgusting, ugly, irritating slob...and since he's my favorite Ronin, I'm soo glad that you didn't do that! I also loved the little comment on the Mary Sue and Sailor Moon! Again, I thank you from the bottom of my heart! Keep it up! I haven't gotten the chance to read all of your story yet, but I know that I'll like it!

I was so surprised to stumble back here and find an update it made me so excited and i love the sage/mia budding romance ah i hope you get the next chapter out quickly (christmas present?!) I'll be checking back and keep up the good writing

I apologize for not reviewing this much sooner! You already know how much I adore this story and how well it's developing. For this particular chapter, I like how you introduced your original characters. Unlike so many characters that appear in various fanfics, yours are important enough to be featured in the story and yet at the same time they don't overshadow the main characters. Oh and of course, the Sage and Mia relationship is made of much win!

Oh my goodnes. I haven't even read through the whole thing because I'm boggled down with work, but 'oh my goodness' I'm so happy you guys (fabulous authors) are coming back to write. Hmm...maybe I'll have to write a little fic when I get a chance. Uh, I'll review about the quality once I read all of it :)