x3 you should write for this more/again it sounds pretty cool xD

This is awesome so far! plz continue.

hey i really like this story n i was wounderin if ya were ever goin update it?

Oh my god! Please, update this soon! I HAVE TO READ MORE!

wow...

need...need more...becoming...zombie...

XD

i liked this chapter a lot! now all we need is to find out how he ended up in the cage talked about before...

oh.. boy zombie.. Good but i'm lost (never saw Resident evil or play)

this is a GREAT start. i wanna know about hte experiments, if it's hojo behind it, and yadda yadda. what happened to Shinra or sephiroth? i'm so full of questions i'm dying to know what happens next!

i love the last line. maybe a little cliche but still good. the beginning could use a little more strength. try getting rid of the first sentence and have it start with 'those who try to escape the memories are hunted'. that would make the first line stronger and give it the oomph you want to draw people in.

yeah. little work, another go at the polishing wheel, and i cannot wait for chapter two!

Sounds really interesting, I want more! D

Looks interesting, can't wait for more. :D

sound interesting ... maybe a little longer next time would be better!