|Reviews for Lurking Evil|
| amaya-nights rain 12/18/10 . chapter 2
x3 you should write for this more/again it sounds pretty cool xD
| CrazyAsCoconuts-4 7/2/10 . chapter 1
This is awesome so far! plz continue.
| TerrorInYerTub 3/20/10 . chapter 2
hey i really like this story n i was wounderin if ya were ever goin update it?
| Lenadexil 12/12/08 . chapter 2
Oh my god! Please, update this soon! I HAVE TO READ MORE!
| RabidYaoiFanboy 10/22/08 . chapter 2
i liked this chapter a lot! now all we need is to find out how he ended up in the cage talked about before...
| Lord Makura 10/18/08 . chapter 2
oh.. boy zombie.. Good but i'm lost (never saw Resident evil or play)
| RabidYaoiFanboy 10/9/08 . chapter 1
this is a GREAT start. i wanna know about hte experiments, if it's hojo behind it, and yadda yadda. what happened to Shinra or sephiroth? i'm so full of questions i'm dying to know what happens next!
i love the last line. maybe a little cliche but still good. the beginning could use a little more strength. try getting rid of the first sentence and have it start with 'those who try to escape the memories are hunted'. that would make the first line stronger and give it the oomph you want to draw people in.
yeah. little work, another go at the polishing wheel, and i cannot wait for chapter two!
| xXRemXx 10/8/08 . chapter 1
Sounds really interesting, I want more! D
| Simsie92 10/2/08 . chapter 1
Looks interesting, can't wait for more. :D
| Lord Makura 10/2/08 . chapter 1
sound interesting ... maybe a little longer next time would be better!