 scrimshaw 2008-10-07 . chapter 1I have not read the other two in this sequence, but will definitely find them and review now. This story is the missing episode between seasons, the soul-searching and reconciliation that was (IMHO) missing from s5 opener.
I especially apprciate the return of Mildred, who you got completely in character, to the point that I could actually see the two of them in Charlie's office bantering admist the levels that exist between them and the other characters.
Your dialogue was completely Numb3rs: I even had to read some of the metaphors a few times, which is not a complaint but a compliment, as it meant the math- and geekese was polished and believable. Your introduction with Charlie counseling his grad student made an excellent segway into the discussion of the situation with Don. And I was chuckling at the description of the protest groups and academic hysteria--all things we know would happen.
This story is now going as the only other favorite story I have, and I thank you for filling in the emotional gap between seasons. |