 Iawen Londea 2009-11-21 . chapter 1Great fic! I could definitely see this conversation happening. |
 epalladino 2009-03-05 . chapter 1Nice series of episode tags. Great scene between Don and Charlie, both awkward and angry, but the affection and need for each other is still evident. Thanks, Beth |
 Patty 2008-10-03 . chapter 1 I passed over your story when I first noticed it but eventually came back to it. I'm tickled
to death now I did because it's just great.
The dialogue fits each brother and you gave both's POV beautifully. I do hope the
new season totally exonerates Charlie and gets Don back in the FBI's good graces.
I particularly liked the paragraph beginning Very Zen. It let me picture so many events
in their lives.
Good job, girl !! |
 Serialgal 2008-10-03 . chapter 1Very nice - really liked this. |
 Lisa Paris 2008-10-03 . chapter 1Loved this - nicely done and not overly partisan. I think you raised some really salient points. |
 luvnumb3rs 2008-10-03 . chapter 1Really thought this piece was good! |
 tearbos 2008-10-02 . chapter 1Very nice. I like the range of emotions that you covered, without it being over-dramatic or smushy. |