It's only the first chapter and I already like it! lolz

love it can't wait for the next chapter.

AWESOME! GREAT STORY! PLEASE UPDATE!N I ALSO REALLY LIKED THE FUNNY CLIPS AT THE END OF SOME OF THE CHAPTERS! LOL! :)

your in germeny? cowinky-dink, i'm going there on a school trip in the spring, anything i should know about?

XD Let's hope none of the Elves calls him small. :p

That was AWESOMS!

Lol, your insults give him strength!

Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!

Oh yay. I never get tired of reading of Ed getting caught in his own trap! XD

good so far. can't wait for the next chapter.

Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!

Looking good so far! Keep it up!

ah al's not coming :(

im still loving your story though.

from ell
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is Al gonna show up? i hope so.

otherwise i love this story! :)

Wow. What a great story. Love your writing style. Keep up the good work! And update soon! - Chindu POD