Wow this was better than I expected. Yeah Seto probably wouldn't talk so poeticly, but it wasn't so much out of character that I stopped reading. At least you didn't make him a love-sick idiot like the others ones. I thank you for that.

Shizuka was the most out of character in this, but I didn't mind. The letter was sweet, I like the park about Seto talking about his dark colors. The letter under the pillow was a bit off since if he doesn't like it, he would forget it.

You planned this realisticly and I also thank you for that. Yeah, Mokuba would be the matchmaker. I laughed when I read about Seto's views on Yugi and the mutt and the rest of his cheerleaders. That was definatly in chcaracter.

This was a cute little piece! I agree, Seto is a little out of character, but I guess something never meant to get to anyone would be a little more emotional. But it does seem that he understands himself very well, which is a good point in your favor.
I'm glad you decided to write the little tag at the end. That's the best part of the story; the writing's captivating and their interaction is very nice. And Mokuba is, as always, the token matchmaker =D.
The pairing is actually 'Silentshipping' not 'Prideshipping,' I think the latter is what you called it on the summary. This story plays so nicely with that silent sort of image, them both not saying anything for two years. My favorite part of the story was reading that Seto slept with the letter under his pillow--that's so touching! Not something he'd do, but it works in the context of this story. All in all, a great read, and you should write more of this couple, I'd love to read it!

Sakura Takanouchi

Oh... Oh, twicth, I just read this on deviantart... XD

It's still a nice story though... :)

-Aquabluejay