amazing story i really liked it

That was good, I liked it :D

An excellennt written by a talented imagination. One thing though; work on your grammer and spelling. Other than that, wonderful! XD

wow! i am very proud of you! i remember when i first tried writing a lemon years ago for this series and it was a failure, because i couldn't bring myself to do it back then. But i must congratulate you for being the first, on this sight at least, to write a lemon for "He Is My Master."

I couldn't help but notice you mentioned his "favorite koi izumi" in this piece. I thought that was very intresting because in my story "their little secret," i wrote something about a favorite koi as well, also named Izumi. It's been a long time since i watched that series, but i dont think Izumi Koi was a part of the cannon. I just thought it was cool we came up with the same idea, if it's a small part of both our stories. Great minds think alike i guess. so congrats for this story and good luck to you on future endeavors, and i hope you will reply!

Didnt exactly stay on character, and you could have made the sex scene longer. good job, though

Nice story, It did remind me of "That Night" at least I read the AN, I saw a anonymous review saying you stole from Loubell, pfft. He/she didn't know that you were Loubell's relative.

KK

anyone try making a anna and izumi rated M fanfic please do if anyone reads my review

Is there ever goung to be more? I liked it!Please continue!

You better be continuing this! You can't just draw the line there. If she's pregnant, I'm detecting much hilarity and mood swings directed at Yoshitaka. You don't wanna pass those up now do you?

WOW...VERY IMPRESSIVE WITH THE STORY.

Funny. I like very much. Aside from this one, there's no other good He Is My Master stories. I need a nice long HIMM fic, at least 50,0 words.

Err... Good story but, you copied stuff from That Night by Loubell. Like:

(Loubell)"Tsk, tsk, tsk You're fully clothed and I'm only in my underwear." she whispered in his ear. Natsume groaned. "What am I gonna do with you?" she asked herself out loud.

(you)

Tsk, tsk, tsk You're fully clothed and I'm only in my underwear." she whispered in my ear I groaned at the friction it caused. "What am I gonna do with you?" she asked herself out loud.

(Loubell)Next were his boxers that she noted were blue with yellow smiley faces

(you)Next were my boxers that she noted were blue with yellow smiley faces

(Loubell)Mikan was in the bathroom looking at the pregnancy test on the counter. She was throwing up lately and she knew she wasn't sick. She didn't dare look at it she wanted to keep it a surprise to herself whether or not she was but debated against it. She slowly walked over to the counter where the thing on it would determined her fate.

(You)I was in the bathroom looking at the pregnancy test on the counter. I was throwing up lately and knew I wasn't sick. I didn't dare look at it I wanted to keep it a surprise to myself but debated against it. I slowly walked over to the counter where the thing on it would determined my fate.

I really hope you asked her (or his) permission first. If you did then sorry. It doesn't really Matter that much, but its not nice to steal someones story.

I don't even know who the characters were...or what the manga/anime was...I just randomly clicked on this...and the strange thing? I really enjoyed reading this XD

omg. its a nice story

but sadly something else is in mind O_O

i swear i saw the same exact story as a gakuen alice story

o-o. maybe it was ur other account or someone stole urs? idunno _ . get back to me on that plz ? _ .

btw i love the story :]. i demand more lemons xD

ok byee

Man this was interesting, would love another chapter though, keep up the good work