i ove the twins. karen is so understanding. poor anna she got an owie. i love that word so childish and cute. okay lindsay entrance was wow. bitch fest from the beginning. peyton's last words to lindsay were sweet. short but cutting and straight to the point

Im glad u updated and lucas knows. Update soon.

Great story please update soon. I really hope Lucas goes to see the kids...

HE definitely has to meet the twins, they´re are his children. I guess he and Payton could make things work out again right? Go on!! So cool!! Congrats!

well i understand lukes reaction
i like it

about telling naley well that isn'T all that difficult but i guess they will be angry at first
lindsey is going to be hard but i have a feeling she is going to blame all on peyton and bash her (sad i know)

keep going

u take freakin forever!
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hurry up

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Peyton's next move should be telling Lucas about his kids, he should be the one to go over to her house and see her there with Justin and Anna. Plus it would be great if Peyton was written a little less insecure-I understand why she has been written this way so far but she has two little people relying on her-she needs to be strong for them.

I also don't get why she didn't tell Lucas about her kids when she was first pregnant, even if she believed that her and Luke wouldn't work out-she would never let them grow up without knowing their father. Peyton also knows that Luke would have a hard time forgiving her for not telling him about their kids. Um...other than that I really like this story-how it's written from P's point if view-would love to see a scene with Luke and his kids and Nayley's reaction to Justin & Anna.

Love the story can't wait to when eryone finds out about the twins...

I really like this story. Update soon...

well no clue on reactions but i am pretty sure peyton is going to lucas's and meets lindsey

well i assume she is planning to tell him right now but has a run-in with lindsey

keep going

I hope you can update soon!

great story. update soon!

oh wow i think it is cool that you brought deb in in such a loving way
and well let the drama unfold
keep going