VERY GREAT I DON'T CARE HOW OLD THIS STORY IS PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS CAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! PEACE OUT PEOPLE!

Whoa. Whoa! WHOA! That was so good!! All that piecing together!! The mystery, the suspense, the clever use of flashbacks to give jsut the right amount of information, but not too much of a giveaway! Agh! Amazing!

I really hope the prequel goes into the real Maliks feelings a bit more, because I gots to know more! And, I must say, I feel bad, so bad, for Bakura. Alas that we dont ACTUALLY meet him, but all this utter devotion on his part and he knows theres something amiss with the other but he can never know, whereas the readers are like, "Noes! Sadness! He didnt love you!! Horrible!"

Ya know, even though I like tragic endings, and angsty-ness, I get so depressed from unrequited love and false feelings. The romantic in me (however far you have to dig to find it) is hoping that Malik DID love him in his own sick, twisted way. Which brings me to wondering WTF WAS HIS SECRET THAT RYOU KNEW!? The mysteries left unsolved! Agh!! This is SO going on my favorites!

And I liked Kaiba as a main character (sorta) choice! His relationships with Mokuba and Jounochi were just fabulous and made me laugh on quite a few occasions! Very good writing, sad story, intriguing plot, and great way to just sorta wrap it up. And the ending was great! Im onto the prequel now!
-Sunny

Oh yea, leave off there. That's where you and the real Malik were
different. You keep implying that the blond never really loved baku, but you leave off.. NO I have to wait for the prequel and sequel's now.. sob.

So many unanswered questions, but you said in the epilogue that would be the case. Oh hurry.. please. lol

Amazing, I couldn't stop reading it. Very powerful and well written. ...
this is an incredible absorbing story but but I get the feeling that you left a lot of things unsaid. ...
i will wait for the sequel!!

i loved this story.. when are you going to start Ningen?

Great as usual! "continued In Ningen" ? So, there's a sequel, and this story is over? I dunno :) Wherever you continue it, I'll be waiting!

GOod chapter. So Malik, the real one didn't love Bakura? Wow you are right there are a lot of unanswered questions.

Hm interesing. So Malik loved Bakura but didn't want to?

Hey! Hey, things still aren't explained (I know, I was warned, but still)! I hope the sequel will be out soon, I want to know what's going on! I think I can sympathise with Bakura's frustration. XD

The whole thing with Bakura looking for the real one in his dolls and creating them so they do love him is so creepy and wrong, and yet it seems so real to Malik...

I loved the whole exchange about cats (Malik's ignorance is so weird, because at the same time he's intelligent and adult): the two Kaibas and Jounouchi have a really fun dynamic.

Ahh, I've been reading this story religiously since it was published~

I hope you update soon! :D

Ah, that was just so cute. Maybe when the other dolls have been gone over, they can be modified to resemble the last or just updated and repaired; then given to whom you'd like.

One to Touzoku for sure. lol Seto can have the original he laid claim to. lol

Up to you, but I do like what you are doing with this and hope your semester is going great.

Yes, I'm going to vote, but I already know I will be torn badly. lol

cool Chapter

Wow, the plot is so intricate...very nice job.

This is an amazing story!! I'm excited for the end. Please keep up the good work!!

Wow, this is all really interesting and *creepy*. I can't wait to find out what exactly happened between Bakura and Malik.