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Blacksword Zero
2008-11-11 . chapter 2
I can't wait the next chapter!
AsuCaga01
2008-10-25 . chapter 2
I LOVE THIS STORY!Update..^.^
JC-zala
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
I'm a big fan of the twins and I'm impressed with this fic. Heart-wrenching and flowing emotions from Kira made me feel lonely for him. He loves his sister so much and he can't bear seeing her so happy with his best friend. The feeling of unrequited love and the truth which brings pain... Oh, so nice! KiraxCagalli rules!
Juveniliare
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Woot! What happend to Lacus..??
Crying alone knowing Kira's secret crush..??

It's cool..!! I sometimes like a triangle love story plot with Cagalli as the center of it (well duh! I'm a CagalliHolic after all =D)

'...hadn’t felt Cagalli’s palm wipe away his tears...' and I thought you will make Kira somehow snap and kiss her right infornt of Athrun..

It can be one interesting fic if you continue this story. But please dont make it KIraCagalli.. Just make sure you make Kira suffer.. lol
xXxUnReQuitEdxXx
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
Nice :)
AsuCaga01
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
WoW!that's so nice,..I love it..^.^
Jade Valentine
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
How Romantic! I hope you write it longer and put another chapter. I wish they were not siblings at all but anyways i love the story. Please write more, thank you!
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