I absolutely love Amaya. She had this calm personality that's not as cold as Sasuke, but not as mellow as Shikamaru. Like, in between I guess, since she has her exclamation point moments.
Hmm, I think that Naruto is actually starting to like Amaya more than a friend, but continues to hide it by using Sakura as a excuse. What do you think of that? Or Maybe Naruto is starting to look up to Amaya as a mother figure. Who knows.
Update soon.

I loved this chapter. I love the whole story, really. It's great. Update soon. ^_^

I like it so far. ^_^

Update soon~!

Nice chapter, and thanks for the update! That quip about Shikamaru was pretty funny. He's one of my favorite characters... please update soon! (Oh, also, update With Bated Breath soon as well. I really like it.)

D8 You really skipped around in this chapter... didn't like that too much.
But still a good story.

Great update, I loved it! Keep up the great work.

Awesome! Update again soon. I like how you don't write about every single event, like the Zabuza fight. After reading so many variations that end up the same way, it's a relief to just skip that scene and reference back to it to allow us to infer the events. Great.

Must say, this chapter was awesome! 8D

Excellent update. I love her new jutsu. Its awesome. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next update.

Cool chapter. I like how Sakura isn't all one-demensional like many fanfictions make her out to be in the beginning. Nice job! Update soon, please! BTW, I love With Bated Breath. Update that soon, too! ;D

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its quite clear your making you oc perfect and only putting in the few flaws to make it look like she isn't overpowered a smart person could easily picked this out

why are you having the rest of the characters follow canon while your oc gets stronger and more mature i mean the polnt of oc's is to change the story and characters

now this is what really pissed me off one why was naruto just watching your (Perfect ) oc train he should have been training too this is another example of your oc getting stronger while naruto and the others stay canon two why did naruto get sent away when your oc started learning jutsu the same reason as before

why right a story where characters follow canon if we wanted to read canon we would read the manga and if i'm wrong please explain why you did this in your next chapter

and its clear that you favor sasuke and sakura and if you do any thing different from canon then it will be making them stronger and not naruto heck what you are doing with naruto is considered as bashing him i mean you had your (perfect) oc called him annoying and its different when authers have sakura say it because it not ment to bash naruto no it ment to bash sakura

and i bet you noticed through out my whole review i didn't call you oc by name this is to show how much you falled because a good oc feels like they belong in a story and people conect with them and they become a part of the story just as any other character like kakashi and can't be repaced an example of this is the story neoyondaine hokage and his oc royoto i suggest you read this story and look how royoto is writen and how she becomes a part of the story not just in the story

and please no naruto bashing

this is not a flame i don't hate your story it interests me and i'd like to see it get better and i hope my opinion and suggestion helps make this story better

ps the reason why you are getting so little reviews and hits is because how you portray naruto almost every auther or reviewer like him and the few stories that bash him get harased so much they delete the story and quit all to gether so my advice to you is to not make naruto a side character and at the very least give him a couple of girls and not any girls in the leaf girls like yugito or tayuya you will get lots of hits and reviews and you can still make this story about your (perfect ) oc

Since this is an AU, maybe have Naruto atleast a little better.

Hmm... I would say Naruto should know who his parents are, but dosen't mention it to anyone, it could be cool. I don't like Kakashi's attitude so far tbh.

Post more soon!

Heheh, nice chapter, love the new jutsu. Sasuke actually asking for help was a nice part too, ah, Sasuke actually lowering himeself from his little stool of stick up his ass-ness. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter, see ya!
-Narutofang91