Fabulous job! You captured the essence of Natalie so well! You kept her personality, but managed to show her softer side. I think that's something we all have been waiting for. And good job never revealing all of what had happened on the episodes. Very nice job.

cute :D GREAT WORK! Love it :) Keep it up!

I can't say enough but as usual well written and capturing Natalie Teeger is your specialty. Her musings bring the reader right there as if she'd talking to us. I can see it.

Really great, keep it coming!

I love your stories. I just wish they were longer, because now I have to go back to boring old work...lol Maybe the next one will be longer, right?! Please...

Thanks for sharing,
SpaceCadet

I loved that episode , great job!

Hm hint hint at the end. Very excellent!

With Monk's reaction to "cheating" on Nat at the start, I wonder what shippy things have happened in the two episodes that were meant to be before this... don't think i didnt see the wedding ring ;)

Well written as always and a nice hint at the end of what may be to come, and of Nat's true feelings.

I just recently discovered this website, and of course went immediatly to the monk stories. I really like how you present each chapter in Natalie's POV. I am a Monk/Natalie shipper myself, although I doubt the writers are going to make me happy by writing them together. I really like how the romance is subtle and slow awakening in your chapters. Just little hints here and there. Good Job! I can't wait for more.

The "we should kiss" line was awesome, it was so shippy and that whole speaking what you really think without thinking was in action there.

Why did Monk need a big house all to himself? we know why :D Adrialie live in each others pockets anyways they may as well move in together.

so, when he fed her off his fork, i almost **.
best part of any episode. ever. lol.

Very cute as usual. Great confession to start with. The fork thing was a big step!!

You do an excellent job at capturing Natalie in mind and word. I can see her and hear her. Well done as always.

Great job, as usual. Very well written.

Thanks for sharing,
SpaceCadet