Pleasae finish this! The idea is original and your writing is beautiful.

that was so good please make a part 2, just one little thing...can you make the next one just a little bit longer? I know you worked really hard (i think you did, your story was really good) and im not trying to make it sound bad but when i find a good story (like yours) i like it long...but dont rush ok? two thoumbs up!

uwah so cute ^^ i really like it i really do
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pls make the next chappie

This will be interesting...you certainly have a way with words...this chapter reads so eloquently...update!

wow...! I'm breathless!! i love your style!! it's so freash after all the ditzy language romance usually expresses itself in for many authors. keep it up!

yay! i'm excited for the next chapter. i love starstruck neji. :D

O.O

Don't have time to write a full, proper review but jesu cristo I LOVE this. I'm so glad I sneaked some time off university to read this; you know how much I enjoy AU's, and well written ones are always such a treat. Fairy tale Nejiten? DUDE. And I really, really like the whole Artemis-like take on Tenten. Huntress indeed. Kickass!

I'm as starstruck as Neji was...

Mwahahahaha... So cute, and it's always fun to see Neji struck speechless.
Good job, updat soon!!

Oh, interesting! I love all of your descriptions, it really makes the story come to life. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

I would tell you that I think you're awesome, but then you already know that.

I love your choice of words. They flow so easily and so naturally that the whole story is made doubly beautiful by them. The style also puts you right into the whole fairy tale setting, which is wonderful, as well. Very nicely done. I hope to see the next (and last, apparently) chapter soon! :)

An odd, renaissance style NejiTen? Will you never cease to amaze me? Did Neji step into a fairy ring? Okay, enough questions. Let me just say that you have me hooked, and I can't wait for the rest of this.

Hee, fairy tale! Fun! :D So happy to see some more NejiTen from you, and I foresee some very interesting analogies between the Narutoverse and MedievalNarutoverse in this story's future.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter of your work, as always. :)

I'm definitely interested, I can't wait for the next chapter!