wow. just...wow.

i cant really think of anything else to say right now.

i re-read this after a while and was once again struck by how amazing and simplistic it was.

it captured perfectly the essense of what they would be feeling should this actually have happened.

the speculation for the season finale was almost exactly how i pictured it would happen!

i always thought, with lydia gone, in the end, everyone would finally ditch samuel and turn to claire to be their new leader.

and she would start by gaining their trust, then gaining the world's trust.

and peter being there to help her was a perfect touch :)

in short,

LOVED IT!

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Wonderful.

"...that’s the least they deserve"

i love how poetic this is! it suits you you should write like that more often :D

xoxo

kat :)

Nicely done on all four counts! It is fantastique!

Mandala M.

OH, that's a good one. I forgot how you can create the image without coming out and saying it. Nice

Mandala M.

oh. i loved this! absolute ingenius!

aww. amazing. u have skill ]

loved it! ]

haha. lollz. lovely lovely lovely!

i know its incest and all, but recently ive become addicted to Heroes...and more so to Peter/Claire pairings...

this was wonderful :PP

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good job!

x

beautifully written ellie and i love how you hinted that angela knows what's going on :P beautiful imagery btw, a very good ficlet indeed *nods*

xoxo

kat :)

Awesome!

I love the idea :P

Oh, wow. I loved that. Honest. And not just 'cause I like black nail polish, hehe. But I really liked how the black polish represented what she was SUPPOSED to feel, the guilt she was SUPPOSED to have. And I positively loved how 'the rules begin to change' and she wore red polish after he said he loved her. That got a definite 'aww' from me. :) So, great job. I know Paire is not a particularly fluffly pairing, but i found this small piece rather cute and it gave me that nice warm and fuzzy feeling. I really really loved it in case that hasnt been made apparent. :)

Sleeping to Dream About You

omigosh I adore the opening quote, I definitely want to remember that.

Anyways I loved the writing in this one, your descriptions are amazing! How he slithers into the room, or the image of the hands of the clock, brilliant.

i just read all three. i'll admit that they are really good. i think #2 was my fave so far.

that was really good. Please update asap.