A great story. Very good.

I never cry, NEVER CRY! but I had tears running down my cheeks when I read this story. It is so happy and sad at the same time it is overwhelming. I felt the same way I do when I read the end of the Lord of the Rings and the Last Battle(Chronicles of Narnia), that same happy sad feeling. Thank you for the beautiful witness of faith in Jesus Christ.
I'm still crying.

Oh, this one was a real tear-jerker. Really well done. It touched my heart, being a piano player as well... To never hear again. *shudder*. But I think that this was absolutely beautiful, and I commend you on all the work that obviously went into this piece. Thanks for posting this, because it really made my day.
God bless you and yours,
bookwurm23

Thank you. Thank you for sharing this beautiful gift God has given you with us. It is such a blessing.

Beautiful. Really beautiful.

Now this...I fear there aren't enough words for 'amazing' to describe it.

Wow. That was so beautiful. I can't begin to describe how much this story means to me. I cried. Trusting God with things like this is something I used to struggle with constantly - it's still hard sometimes. But He's shown me that just because one door is closed, doesn't mean my life is over.
A couple months ago I was diagnosed with Polycystic Ovary Syndrome(PCOS). It's something that messes with my hormones, and having it very well means that I may not be able to have my own children. That was my worst fear for most of my life. But through it God is telling me that my plans aren't his. And even though having PCOS scared me at first, He's shown me something beautiful can come from it.

Thanks for this story.

*sniff-sniff* Wow that was powerful. This is absolutely awesome. Praise God for the music in our hearts and souls!

God Bless,
Jessica

AMAZING! Thank you so much! I wish I could cry; tears would be a blessed relief! God bless you!

Wow! That was amazing. I just picked up one line that I think is a typo:
"Josie took the whole gang went out for a nature walk"

Thanks for an amazing story,
charli

Beautiful story! Well written. It genuinely touches the soul. Thank you for posting it. :)

This looks like a nice fic, but it's actually in the wrong place. It's not really fanfiction for the Bible (which would be stories from the POV of Bible chars or such, by the definition of fanfiction), it's original fiction with Christian themes. There's a sister site to this one, set up specifically for original fiction; it's called FictionPress. I recommend you get an account there and move this there; there's even a category there for fics with spiritual themes, where this fic will fit nicely.

You have brought tears to my eyes Dearheart. Truly a lovely story. I laughed when the parents argued, they sounded just like mine. And the end. Powerful. I take my hat off to you.
Your devoted fan,
~Sapphira Adi~

What?! Only 4 reviews! I was in tears! That was beautifully done, here I am trying to type my history vocab and read when I start crying! Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you !
♫ openmeadow ♫

I love it. Once again, you have amazed me. You ROCK. Sign Language, Five Love Languages, Superchick, music, deafness, choices, God... Ohman. I'm seriously thanking God right now that you're so talented and share your talent with random people you don't even know. It's amazing. Keep it up. :)