man such a good story

I am in love with what you have posted so far; so different and well written, sparking interest and little bursts of mystery and fear with subtle hints of romance. Another wonderful story by an amazing author, albeit confusing at times it is all over an amazing story.

I cannot wait to read more of this story that I can picture so vividly in my mind, and let me tell you that it is a beautiful and frightening picture you are painting.

are you going to continue this? please say yes! i'm hooked and its only chapter two!

are u going to write more of this?

Story is great! I loved Vampire Heart and Collide, just so you know. You are a great writer! Keep up with this story its very very good!

o come on this is really really REALLY GOOD! you got to write more to this i hope you do

this story is so cool! you haven't updated in forever please tell me that you didn't give up!

Man, that was very creepy and very intriguing at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter!

nice story!

I'm really enjoying this mistery story you have here. I had goosebumps over my arms when this chapter ended with the misterious eyes behind Bella! So creepy! I'm loving this! So I hope you plan on continuing with this story because I'm dying to know what'll come next!

OH MY God This is So Creepy please Update soon I just found this and I love every story by you so far that I've read!

I love this, it's so weird WHAT is going on?

Oh wow interesting. A bit creepy. Have you given up on this plot?

Oh..it's creepy but the way Bella and Edward interact lifts the story atmosphere :P will you be continuing?

I love it, really creative and creepy. update soon.