This was really good representation of Naoki and of his complex feelings. Brilliant, left with the slight desire to strangle him, but also to cheer for him and Kotoko.
Well done

hi! it's so sweet thoughts of Naoki, i think x) i like it!! so honestly) especially ending, it is in naoki's style xD
i'm from Russia and i translated your fanfic into Russian) sorry that i haven't asked if i could do this( of course i wrote there your nickname and the site of original. i hope very much that u aren't against it! ^^
i couldn't translate only the name of the story xD because i can't understand it, unfortunately(
arigatou! in russian fandom, there are too many fanfiction about this anime and so i find it usually on such sites xD

kawaii!!
anymore?

Aw..

I especially love that last line... :D

Nice. I like this honest (at least to himself) Naoki.

Wow, that's awes0me!
Naoki's POV !
Yeah, , soo naoki~
i think it would be nice if u cntnue this xD

Ahh!! So sweet!! *seeing stars* I love it...it just makes one love Irie so much more, you get to see him as a human. I'm a sucker for sappy stuff...keep writing! ^_^

awe! that was so cute! thanks for writing!

wow!
i love it!
this one is so much better than the first one i've reviewed...
and this one speaks so much truth about the anime...
"I was going to tell her that I loved her.

But I was never going to tell her how much."
however, if you watch the taiwanese series, even if Naoki (Zhi Shu) didn't told Kotoko (Xiang Qin), she knew because she eavesdropped...
LOLZ!
hope you make another one again!
with more fluffs, kay?