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Kaysie
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
This is an amazing story. Thank you for writing it and I really liked the fact that you quoted the bible.
SeasonVelvet
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
No more on Chloe?
Masterarcher
2005-10-31 . chapter 1
AW! That enough w's for you? I loved this! It was perfect and cute and fluffy! I like the friendship with Lex and clark and that the quarterback wanted to help find clark o and I wanted to hit clark for that present to Chloe! Poor girl! She is much better for clark than Lana. Well all in all this was a cute story and I loved it!:)
iluvsmallville1
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
Amazing story! Great writing!
JEBstah7
2004-03-23 . chapter 1
Couldn't Clark have just superspeeded to Metropolis?
HemisH
2004-02-24 . chapter 1
Wow! I really enjoyed this one. Great story.
Maybe you underestimated Clark's powers but you still managed to make everything flow without an itch.
And god... Was Clark mean to Chloe or what? I was so sad for her, she's my favorite :)
Keep up the good work... on my way to read "The Morning After" now!
SHSAlumni
2004-02-16 . chapter 1
Phaze-
I'm a Christian, too, and I have two things to tell you:
1. You should be commended for your witness through all of your stories. You are my favorite FF.net writer. Keep up the good work.
2. I was really feeling horrible when I read The Perfect Christmas Gift, and the passage you put it just really comforted me. I want to thank you. God knew I was going to read it and so he put it there for me. You are in my prayers.
Keep fighting the good fight,
Webster7
The Galactic Goddess
2002-10-05 . chapter 1
Awww.... This was fantastic... I haven't read any of your other reviews and I hope I wasn't the only reader who got misty eyed... *Whimpers*

This was great... I have to check out more of your work...
MitchPell
2002-09-23 . chapter 1
SEE!! I knew I read this!! But I didn't read it here! It was either over at LexSlash or Slashdom, or Level Three!! But I did read it before!! Oh, BTW, I really liked this story as well!! Keep posting A Death In The Family!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :) :)
Lisette
2002-05-07 . chapter 1
This story was excellent!! I truly enjoyed the story line and the action that it entailed!! A few spelling and grammar problems, but the story-telling was great... you got me all in the Christmas spirit.. in May! :) Great job and keep up the excellent work! I look forward to reading your next few stories!
Dante de Troy
2002-05-04 . chapter 1
Okay... give me a sec while I clean this darned wetness off my glasses... okay, there we go. Wow. This is an absolutely GREAT story. I don't think that any team of writers could have better captured the essence of the christmas spirit as it applies to the lives of these characters. Bravo.
Lady Russell Holmes
2002-04-29 . chapter 1
I can really pisture Clark and Family as Christians, and I like Lex's reactions to that aspect of their lives. Lana-Clark-Chloe triangle feels very unresolved, another chapter or two maybe?
Freya
2002-01-08 . chapter 1
Waaaaaaa!!! I loved it! So sweet! I like the idea of the guys in the PJ's with the booties on them, though.
mja47
2001-11-20 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story, especially when you had Jonathan read the Christmas Story. :o) For some reason, I can honestly say that the Kent family celebrating Christmas in light of Christ as 100% believable. My only critique is that you check your spelling and tense. There are a lot of verb tense changes throughout the story that make it rather frustrating to read at times. If you ever want someone to edit your stories, feel free to email me (just check my profile for my addy). I love to edit stories and help fellow writers. This is a great story! Keep writing!
beziestar
2001-11-18 . chapter 1
Aw! That was soooooooooooooo sweet! Perfectly wonderful WAFF!
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