Humph

Humph. You made Querl theif? Brainy would never steal anything. How insulting. >:(

[snerk] Kell, you big pushover !!

I'm guessing Ayla will get to serve as the "clever servant" character who matches wits with the thieves. Is my memory right on that ? Hm...

They ACTUALLY plucked his eyelashes off? And please, it was my pleasure.

Haha! I knew. At first I was like HUH? but then I realized you were using the donkey meaning. Funny.

Aw...Kelly & Louise are such a cute couple! ^w^ *gives you a cupcake for writing such a cute story* LOL! i luv the part where Brainy stole Superman's ** LOL and yes i did know an ** wuz a donkey, i like donkeys they'r CUTE!!^w^ anyways please write more i wuv this story *munches on popcorn while reading*
you're a good story maker-upper um what do they call those things?...oh yeah. writers.. *runs away from stupidness coming for me*

(Cough.) Too much ** on this board this week. When did we all turn into Futurama reruns.

Oh, the shame...

[snerk]

Heh! Genies are so stupid! Nice. You thought about doing Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves? Lightning Lad and Saturn Girl could fit well into that story, but you already used them so...and nice use of innuendo.

Hmm! The ** part was really funny! I know an ** is a donkey, but that doesn't stop my immature humor!

Nice job! Keep it up!

I've got to say, Sussa may be a b!tch, but it is a far cry from the racist b!tch she's been in the comics. I noticed the irony in White Trip being the one left, instead of Orange and Purple Trip. Good chapter. Although, I have a question.

What do you mean by "swan lake fairy husband"?

I know it, Kell aint gonna kill her. Not unless you end up blood thirsty for the end, though i don't think ya would. *veggie ya know?* Carry on please. More... more...

Wicked Chapter!
I think Kana would be perfect for Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves.
XD
BTW; I finished drawing Louise; check her out on DA! See and comment! Please and Thank you!

One nitpick only, really:

Jo is a merchant, but he calls the guy who helped save his son "my farmer." Probably good to clarify if Jo is a landowner who lets out land to another man for farming. I assume that's what you meant, right ?

Anyway, looking forward to more. :)

I love this fanfic's chapter, Cassandra!! It's great!!

Hm! Another good chappie! Nice job Green-Gal!