This is pretty cute! A nice TEAM story where they are all working together. Good characterization, very believable. Thanks for sharing.

Amazing story, though I wish there was more.

Sheppard's inner voice, I like it. Keep up the good work.

Wow, just wow. Great story - loved the idea of it; they each take care of him in their own ways, yet his frustration at not being able to communicate at all but finding comfort in what each one of them did for him.

nicely done! realy good! I could almost feel the fear, poor shep! thanks for writting this!

love the way u ended it
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I like how you wrote it all from Sheppard's POV; especially since with his limited sight describing anything must have been quite a challenge. My favorite part is when Rodney keeps echoing his thoughts and, oh yeah, the line, 'Sheppard doesn't want to meet the problem Rodney can't fix.'

Nice fic. As someone who unfortunately suffers from the occassional case of sleep paralysis, waking up not being able to move can be very terrifying! So reading this I felt very tense. It was nice to read that his team took care of him.

I have to say that I really liked this story. Well done. It would have been cool if you could have brought the team home, back to Atlantis. But other then that, really good job.

AWWE!

Team comfort!! *hugs* Yes!

This was fantastic! Thanks for such an awesome story. :D

Great story. Enjoyed it very much. Keep up the superb writing.

Im still giggling about the end. That was good! Frustrating for Sheppard, but it worked out in the end.

What a great story. I could really feel John's frustration at not being able to communicate, and the panic he felt at first when Teyla was so close, carding fingers through his hair, evoking emotions he usually kept buttoned up. Also enjoyed how he sussed who was poking at the fire from the few mutters and correctly identifying Rodney.

A lovely example of how the team look out for each other and of how John worried for them even as they cared for him.

Bravo.

Aw, team fic. *g* Shep whump and communal sleeping arrangements...Doesn't get any better than that! Well done.

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