 LuckyBlackCat 2009-11-17 . chapter 48Out of the new batch, I liked "Stand" best. I think it's because in the anime they only seem to show their feelings for each other when the other one is UNCONSCIOUS, DYING, whatever (grr!), and it stays true to that.
You can never have too many endings to that duel because the real ending was a cop out: my favourite was "Ever the Same". She couldn't have run off if he actually woke up. I like how you bring in Mai's urge to run away from everything in this one.
"From Where You Are"-gloom, doom, why does nothing ever go right?
"Finale"- :D :D :D
"Exit to Exit"- the running again. It was a good idea about where Mai disappeared off to after Doom.
You're doing NaNoWriMo and updating fanfiction? I get worn out after typing 1667 words every day-amazing. |
 LuckyBlackCat 2009-11-07 . chapter 46Still love these random oneshots. I definitely needed ch 46 after ch 45...I'm slightly curious about what happened to Shizuka.
Ch 46- had no idea what it was all about (mecha battles?) but anyway, it was a lot more upbeat.
"neither of them caring what the rest of the crew thought"
They seem to have loosened up a bit in showing their feelings, which I liked and hey, I have no objections to a happy ending :D |
 The Rainwalker 2009-11-01 . chapter 44Darkrunner, good to hear from you again. How are you doing, how is school treating you?
Okay this Forever Yours (Reprise) was downright scary and disturbing, fortunately at least i think Mai decided to pull back. It's a good thing too, maybe it's just me but I prefer stories where Mai and Jounouchi live happily ever after.
Anyway I'm now here on the site registered and ready to go. And Darkrunner if you get the chance I'd like to invite you to come to the forum I'm a part of RESPECT. It's a safe place where writer's can contemplate stories, chat with fellow writers and fans, and generally be safe from flame wars or any of that nonsense. I realize you have school work but if you ever get the chance come to RESPECT. Either type it in the search box after you bring up forums or look for it in the General forums section. Keep writing as you can. And come to RESPECT whenever you can. |
 LuckyBlackCat 2009-10-31 . chapter 44I think this is a great idea- song inspired one shots. This fic inspired me to try it too and I got some good results :D I love polarshipping too, so reading this was fun. |
 journey maker 2008-10-25 . chapter 36I love these stories about Joey and Mai.. |
 journey maker 2008-10-25 . chapter 35I would of loved to have seen her face when he stumbled over her.. I love reading these... Must read on. |
 journey maker 2008-10-25 . chapter 34To bad Joey wasn't able to stop Malik, if he was then Mai would be alright.. Must read on. |
 Jessa Wheeler Princeton 2008-10-20 . chapter 36That's it? What about her reaction? |
 journey maker 2008-10-09 . chapter 33Loved it.. please update when you can.. |
 journey maker 2008-10-09 . chapter 32I love it. |
 journey maker 2008-10-09 . chapter 31To bad that they were so stubborn, they might of been able to really let the other one in if they'd just open up.. |
 Journey Maker 2008-10-08 . chapter 30 I love all your stories...Please update when you can... |
 Journey Maker 2008-10-08 . chapter 29 I loved it.. |
 Journey Maker 2008-10-08 . chapter 28 I felt sorry for Mai in this one, she never really knew that Jou hadn't given up finding her.. |
 journey maker 2008-10-08 . chapter 27I absolutley love all your Jou x Mai stories... Please update when you can.. |