I'll do it! I'll be looking forward to this story.

This was something amazing.

I cannot believe this . . . It was just fantastic. You showed that Ozai is just a person, and people can, in fact, change. Fabulous job. I look foward to more.

I enjoyed it. I give this story two thumbs up.

True frugality, true humility and true compassion. Those would be hard locks for Ozai to open, and apparently he has to keep them open. That's going to be harder. I suspect he's going to relock one of them at least once.
You're the first person I've read whose tried to reform Ozai. Is this just an optimistic viewpoint or did you see something in the series that made you think there was hope for him?
Where and when does this monk come from and how does he know that Ozai is needed to save the world?
A couple typos, but otherwise a very interesting start.

Ooh please continue.What did zuko think when he realized his dad was gone.