its cute! :D i really loved it! hee hee hitsugaya is a light bulb! :D

I never really heard of that term and frankly, you're right. It does sound better. ^_^

Very cute one-shot, as always. It's about frigging time, ya know? Geez, sometimes guys, especially the logical so-called geniuses, can be pretty dense. XD

great!!

ngaww finally toushiro became a 'man' in karin's eyes LOL! anyways good luckies with your future stories! its interesting =D. Rangiku is so funny xD

heheh. very sweet. keep it up! i don't know why but i love the whole love-you-so-much-i'll-let-you-go thing. hee!

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THAT WAS SO FREAKING AMAZING, I LOVE/READ ALL OF YOUR TORIES AND I HAVE TO SAY ITS ALL SO GOOD AWESOME, you know i actually read every last story you had ever written on her -execpt Sakura, but im definetly on chap 3*sorry for rejecting it Gryn-sama, really wasnt one for ooc pairing, back then of course* that was in fact the first ooc pairing i have read... so yea all your stories are amazing-some i didnt review*soory milady* but i do know them all, if youd had a test id most definetly ace! so you just keep writing more Milady- dont know if im your number1 fan*though i say so in my book* im definetly up there!! JA NE, GRYN-SAMA!!

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lol i loved it! =3 sorta made me cry though in the middle :[

This was a lot of fun to read (^_^) Thanks for posting it!

P.S. The term third wheel refers to something or someone that's not needed. Think about it like this, what three wheeled vehicle have you ever seen that wouldn't work with just two instead?

I seem to be adding a lot of one shots to my favs list lately.
But good work again! XD

another wonderfully well written toushirou/karin! thank you! this was really good. sad it was a one shot but still really good so thanks again!

Good explanation about why the light bulb can be use to describe a third wheel...
I'm Chinese and I speak Cantonese, so I always wondered why they call a third wheel a light bulb...
I like how you made Toshiro have such low self-esteem and how jealous he was...
It was a good twist when Karin revealed to Toshiro that she has feelings for him because it really didn't seem like it to me... but maybe that is because I didn't know what they were like before the him thing...
Love the ending! At least they ended up together even thought it was sort of messy on all three sides...
If you have time, you should make it more into a story.
I know how... awkward it could be to be a light bulb. I had to go to McDonald's with my friend and her boyfriend and they chose to sit in one of those booths. I was stuck right next to her and had to watch the two of them being lovey-dovey... It was traumatizing to say the least.

I loved it. Although, I have to say, I prefer third wheel. If you don't get it, think of a bicycle - it only needs to wheels to operate, similar to a couple. A third wheel is something that isn't included in the design, which is basically what that term means.

Again, I loved it. Especially the HIM thing, lol. xP

Aw...I like it.

Haha! Wow. That was just awesome! :D
I'm just about to write a huge paragraph about it. But once I do, it takes forever for me to stop. x] So overall, that was the greatest. :D I just loved it. ;D