not bad at all, he pretty much IC. there's just a few...loose ends in this story. kinda like you meant to add more chapters to it.

overall, 8/10

I loved it, and this is coming from a crazed obsessed fan!(ok, maybe i'm not CRAZY but you would be scared by how much i talk about this manga)
So you were trying to capture Neuro's personality, right? He's hard to write (i've never actually tried to write about him, but i did think about it for a while. And my brain almost exploded trying to get it right), and i thought you did extremely well. Yay! Cookies for yoou!
Until your next fanfic,

~Akiko

Seeing as you don't have any reviews yet, I will be the first one. It's definitely not my favorite, but that could just be because I know so little about the manga. Although, I like your Ghost Hunt fic a lot more and I know even less about that manga. I'll still be your beta reader for this fic if you need one, although you seem to be doing a lot better than on the other story. Do you already have a beta for this one? That's all for now.