So CUTE! The comparison between their personalities is great, and very appropriate. I love the line "Yuuri had everyone to love and to be loved by. Shinou, Murata realized, had no one left but him." Very touching..

I loved this story so much! Murata's relationship of sorts, with Shinou is so complex! You captured it perfectly! I actually feel like I learned something about Yuri, for your insight on him! Short and sweet, great story. Thanks for writing!

Beautiful! Love it! ^-^

I really liked the comparison and contrasting paragraph between Yuuri and Shinou. Very appropriate. ^^ Shinou/Murata! I can never find any I like...I'm glad I stumbled onto this!

~ Val

That was just so perfect!! I really love the words and the thoughts and how right everything flowed! XD I love the two of them to little bits and your story made me love them even more! XD Lost of love!!

omg

that was ... AWESOME (incap's doesn't even come close ..and thats like WOW)

i love murken

and your piece just discribed well how i rationaise his feelings to be in someway ...

although i'm a very full on suporter of SHINOU X MURAKEN ... and how ken-chan's love for him is unexplainable ..if i was a person who listened to facts and logic .. your Story would have swayed me and made me believe that Muraken didn't love Shinou so whole heartedly ... THANK GOD I" NOT A VERY LOGICAL PERSON THEN ..

LOL

JADE

That was cool x) but so short...