that was really good. oh. yeah i found Emmett. I'll send him via-email.

So lovely! I loved it! The way Edward takes care of Bella. Your Emmett was really nice, not a stupid dumbass. And Esme is soo Esme! I love it"

This was really good! You should write more short stories!

Aw... I liked it. It was great Edward/Bella!

cute and funny story, I really liked it!.. :)

Great job! nice story!

this was so cute and funny. my favorite parts were:

“For godsakes, Alice, turn on the TV. And make it loud.”

AND

“She keeps her eye out for shopping opportunities,” Jasper, Rose and Emmett all chorused together.

AND

“You know I worry about you, little brother. You always were the weak, sickly one. I wouldn’t want you to come down with pneumonia or something.” Emmett answered with exaggerated concern.

AND

It was Jasper who answered him. “Oh we still think you’re perverse, Edward. It was never about watching her sleep. It was about what we thought you did while you watched her sleep.”

Emmett added, “And for the record, Edward, we still think you’re a pervert.”

AND

i loved esme's onshot!

Aw this is so cute!

I love this! There aren't enough Esme stories out there. ( I've read less than 10 from her point of view) It's a great plot, I've always wondered how they'd react to her sleeptalking. Plus, This is extremely in character.

:)

im not usually a fan of fluff but i adored this fic, it was so sweet,