Oo i want more I loved it,
Occupational Health and Saftey people are occaisionally pricks I have one that comes to my work place every month

yay! finally someone is making fun of the OH and S people!

lol. this is funny. please update this? XD

These are very amusing! More?? *puppy dog eyes*

BLOODY. BRILLIANT. I NEED MORE OF THE HEALTH AND SAFETY MAN. I AM OFFICIALLY HIS BIGGEST FAN. BEST. FIC. EVER!

I love your work and whilst going though your stories, I can across this one. I think It has started really well. Please keep writing.
Adele-x

LOL so funny. Poor team how will they cope?
Reall good.
EmKen

This is pure genius! *bows appreciatively* It's so funny, and really well written. You've got the characters spot on. It says give a well rounded review, but I can't find anything to criticise! Um, okasy, I think the os&h man would want to know why they called the 'large pet bird' a pterodactyl. He is a charming little man though! Owen's sarcastic comments are perfect, and so is Gwen's attemps to be nice, even when the os&h man obviously thinks himself superior. Tosh is a bit quiet though-she seems to fade into the bachground. It's incredibly funny-the one fanfic I come to and read to cheer me up when I've had a bad day at school.:)thanks.

great story so far, though i don't know why i find it so funny. 'grin' hope u continue real soon.

Brilliant. Love the team's reactions. Well done, and just plain hilarious.
I can totally see Jack making a fleet of paper airplanes.

And I just want to mention, your fic Muffin(also brilliant) was actually what introduced me to Torchwood in the first place. The line about the stopwatch got me curious, and I felt the need to check it out. And now I'm obsessed :D
-b.r

would love more!

Love this chapter (and the first). Their excuses are brilliant.

Hilarious!

I loved Jack's comment about needing to increase the size of his fleet.
Great story!
Keep up the great work!

Love it. Perfectly captured Ianto's voice.