 AssortedScribbler 10/4/08 . chapter 1To quote Jethro - "Wow." That was incredible! So intense, so beautifully truthful, so wonderfully Jibbs, I can't really find a word to describe how amazing I thought it was. I thought the dialogue was wonderfully written and the way you made the transition between them as partners and them as lovers was exquisite. I loved it, more than loved it, I adored it. It's going on my favourites list and my favourite on the web as well, so I can find it and re-read it again. You know I will, a lot. It was just - well, not just anything. It was terrific. Write again soon!
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