Wonderful! This is one of the best Zelda Stories I have read.
Anju and Kafei is my favorite parring. It really makes you want to save Termina, doesnt it?

Icee Suicune ^^

You write very, very well.
So far I have thoroughly enjoyed eveything I've read of yours, and you're always leaving me wanting more.
I wonder, perhaps, if you could right a brother story to this, Kafeis side.
Or at least another adition to the Daughter of Hyrule series, perhaps Ruto, or even Zelda.

Or maybe another Twilgiht Princess fic...

Makokam out.

All in all, I thought it was excellent. Well written, well described, I liked that you tied in lines from the game and delved into what they could have been thinking at the time.

I was a little amused by Link at the first, when he was doing nothing but grinning and nodding... I didn't think he was going to talk!

I did notice one discrepancy however... really, it's hardly anything at all, but when Anju gave Link the letter for Kafei, she says she wrote it the night after he went missing... however, the letter has to mention Link, in order for Kafei to even meet with him. Just a little something I noticed.

I really loved the story though. How did it do in the contest?

Oh god, I was holding my breath the entire time I read this. Hah...man. You wrote this real well! Each "time" was well placed, and the suspense literally took my breath away! Good job on this, this is truly lovely!

THIS IS PERFECT OH MY GOODNESS I THINK I CRIED Sorry about that... this was a heartfeeling story. I love this couple like no tomorrow. Absolutely adorable. Your writing is so great... its... wow. Please write more.

This was really quite excellent. With the way it was written and the way Anju and Kafei's thoughts are portayed, it pulled everything together wonderfully. This is definetly going on favorites.
By the way, I entered the same contest. My story was Fountain of Wishes, by Peaches732.
-Peaches732