Beautiful.

Very in-character, and very nice flow.

Good job! :)

Missa

P.S. *favorites story!*

Wow, really like it- awesome!

Very well written. You were very true to the character and I can imagine that Dustfinger must have felt exactly like this. It is wonderful that you 'showed' us his impatience, the indecisiveness and fear at the end, instead of 'telling'. It made it feel all the more real. For a moment there I feared he was actually going to kill Basta. Great job!

Very well written! I love it!

Props! Love the characterization and everything about it! Beautifully written...I can't get enough of well-written Dustfinger.

Wow, this is really good, and you've kept Dustfinger very in-character, which is pretty cool. I kept laughing, though, because I recently wrote my own version of this exact scene in my silly parody story... Yours is a bit different, of course, but the basics are the same. Anyway, very nifty story, keep writing!