LOOL dise wtf! Are you colying twilight! You should reference it becos it really seema like you are, dont tell me soon were gonna find out that sai is a warewolf? Omdz and to think i had high hopes for this crap -_- *sigh*

For some reason I feel like I'm reading twilight. It's good tho love how sai's a vampire hunter. I yea those bishes are sexyyy

i LOVE IT IT LIKE TWILIGHT BUT BETTER!

loving it thus far!

The fluff!

(loves)

Nice fight scene in the park. (glares at Sai) "DUDE, you completely ruined the entire mood. AND you played dirty!"

Ah, holy water. There's a thought. I'm glad that Sasuke doesn't sparkle. (gets hit)

(fist pumps) OH YES. She's his. Sai's a hunter.

Let's get on with the sex. :D

(gets shot)

Wow, that perfume bottle... definitely saved her life.

O_O WHO'S SASUKE DRUNK FROM, FROM THE '20S? (dies) Omigod...

I think he should have been somewhere during the 1910's, somewhere in England; then he could've been a part of the Influenza Pandemic and WWI. :D

Lots of bloody gore there.

x_x Omigod, I love how fast your story goes. BAM! Right to the point.

I don't tend to read vampire fics, but just this once, I'm making an exception. :D

Nice...

Oh my gosh I love this story! I love vampire stories and I love SasuSaku stories which means I love THIS story. -sigh- I'm waayyy too happy today. Great fic and I'm blushing from all the M rated stuff. It's good for your fist vamp story. XD

this story is soo cute! moremoremore!

That last part was funny! Acting like little kids stalking. Wow hmm is naruto a hunter?

Oh No they switched places didn't they. NO!

OMG is Sai a werewolf? I know the story is complete but I have to write something!

I really like your story so far. I've never been to Canada. I bet it's hella cold. As for the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, well, you're doing pretty well. For example, it seems you know the difference between "your" and "you're" and you spell "yeah" as such instead of "yea or "ya". These are very common on this website, I'm afraid. But, just a tip: when you put three periods before a sentence, it's still a sentence, so the first letter should be capitalized. I'll. Review again, I'm sure.

-Tatiana, the extremely critical story critic

finally lemon!